菩提本无树,明镜亦非台．本来无一物,何处惹尘埃．阿弥陀佛，弗洛伊德．．．．．

 

 

 

处女作

 

　　　IELTS 的作文让我头疼无比，今天好不容易挤了一篇task 1出来，兄弟姐妹们有空帮忙修改一下啦

 

　　　拜一个先

 

　　　题目是对四个年龄段的妇女的工作情况的pie　chart，０－２一个　３－４一个　５－９一个还有一个是１０+的

　　　分别对３种情况进行了统计　not working ,working part-time and working full-time.

 

         The charts show the proportion of different work patterns of mothers with children in different ages.It reveals that the number of mothers who choose to work is keeping on growing with their children's age.

         A large proportion of mothers  did not take any job, which was account for 70%，　when their children were just born in 0~2 years. However,those taking part-time job or full-time job had only one sixth this proportion,with 19% and 11% respectively.

         As their children became older and older, more and more mothers began to get a job.With their children's age between 3~4 and 5~9, the proportion of working mothers was increasing from 46% to 62%. When their children were older than 10-years, 74% mothers were prone to go out for working, including 29% for full-time job and 45% for part-time job. On the other hand, comparing to 70% mothers did not work with their children in 0~2 years, only 26% of them still choose to stay at home, when their children were growing up to 10-years old.

 

         写得不好，大家见笑了

 

 

 

　　　有３个问题，前两个的翻译觉得自己那样表达的不好

 

　　　１．随着她们孩子年龄的增长

　　　２．在她们的孩子刚刚出生的头两年中

　　　３．关于比例的表达方法，基本上只晓得　proportion　，breakdown知道但是不晓得怎么用，想问下还有其他的说法么

 

 

再拜一个

从小感冒开始

然后听信谣言，不吃药，

结果先是喉咙发炎，然后鼻子，现在发展到耳朵

．．．．虽然听外面的东西是单声道，不过还好起码另一半是自己内心的声音

大家注意身体，表感冒了．．．．

Reviewed by blaise from USA on 29th Jan 2006
this is the worse phone on the planet!!!it's not even suppose to be on the market it needs to go back to the research center!!!!it has troubles getting the network,it's slowly and so many _-_-__---_-don't buy this junk!!!
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Reviewed by ali from michigan on 21st Jan 2006
this is the worst phone ever, i have my thired replacement phone, the first phone keeps shuting off when i end calls even while its charged to the max, somtimes it takes forever to answer an incoming call which i end up missing anyways, the second one also does the samething and has even more problems, i get a no service in the bar's while there is a full signal and i can make phone calls. i just got my thired one god knows what problems this might have.
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Reviewed by Jaymes from United States on 19th Jan 2006
I've had my MPx220 for just under a month now and I've been mentally kicking myself for choosing it ever since! I was attracted to it by the things I need most: a quad-band phone that'll work globally, a 1.2 megapixel camera with video/audio, 512 MB of removable memory, USB modem capability, Windows Media Player, and the '03 Windows internet browser. The Windows browser is great, by the way; it's really nice to be able to log on to MySpace, LiveJournal, eBay...just about any site you try! It's like having a tiny PDA. The lightweight little phone looks nice, too - kinda 60's retro with its chrome speaker face and blocky details. Beyond that, though, the phone sucks! The photos and video are so bad that the resolution on the camera may as well be just 640 x 480. No matter what camera setting I use, the pic's come out dark and hazy. The phone's volume (or lack of) is my biggest peeve, though. The phone HAS to be set on "Outdoor Mode" just to hear anything through the speakers or even the phone ringing. Worse, no one can hear you when you're talking to them! I bet every person on this page has a lot of experience with people saying "What - I can't hear you!" and "Are you standing next to a waterfall or something?". Having to shout to be heard gets annoying REAL fast. Plus, when the speaker volume is turned all the way up, the speaker gets really tinny and tends to vibrate to the point it's hard to understand what people are saying! Another gripe is the fact that the phone is about as user-friendly as a calculus book. Things that should be really easy to find like the alarm clock are buried several steps into menus (if you're looking for yours, open the Start menu, select Settings, select More, select Date and Time (which makes NO sense), then scroll down to the bottom where you'll find the alarm clock settings hiding from the world). More gripes: the clamshell is pretty hard to flip open with one hand, if you miss a call or get a message you won't know without manually checking the inside screen (no flashing light or anything), no way to combine ringing with vibrating (only one or the other), no page-scrolling buttons on the side (they only raise and lower the volume), three second delay when you're answering calls, crappy ring tones and displays...I could go on for quite a while. Suffice it to say, I'll be trading my phone in for something easier to use real soon. I just wish I'd seen this site before I wasted $200 on mine!
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Reviewed by Clarissa from america on 11th Jan 2006
I got this phone for a birthday present and i was so excited until i found out that it was the biggest pile of junk. I sent it back that day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont get this phone seriously, its crap!
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现在我的手机一天自动关机好几次

这个东西真的很垃圾